People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, or to increase knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many students chose universities for higher studies for many reasons that would be taken by themselves.I think why people go to university or college to have a new experience, for a better carrier or to increase their self-knowledge. Here I will provide some reasons that will clarify the reasons.
First of all, many students go to university to have a new experience. This is the first time that people leave home and move to live by themselves when they go to university. Making their own decision without parents may increase their practical knowledge towards daily life also. Students get a chance to communicate with different people around the world and learn different cultures.
Secondly, people have to go to university or college for a better carrier. Career training is most important to young generation than old one. A lot of different skills are trained in colleges and universities. So different students are getting an internship from university/college according to their ability.
Another reason is that persons want to improve their self-knowledge for the personal life. They attend for that to increase their knowledge in subjects that they are interested. For example, many students studied science because of their interest and work in the business area.
In conclusion, people chose the college for many reasons that we are already discussed above. Their decision may have an impact on their life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27947598253 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93656352745 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563318777293 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9254063986 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380064186383 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125941934288 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100026004391 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221459789459 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735796225255 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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