You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?

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You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?

Climate is in itself a diverse field having many areas of studies such as climatology, meteorology, solar physics, oceanography, global change biology etc. All areas have equal importance in the study of climate. It is difficult to choose a particular area of study, but I would prefer global change biology. I will explain further in this essay why I select global change biology.

Global change biology covers ecology, conservation of biology, environmental science. It is the best area to pick up that it deeply covers the effect of climate change on ecology. Ecology studies the interaction of organisms with environment and conservation of biology protects natural species and their habitats. The nasty change in climate can brutally affect the living organisms badly and it changes the rhythm of our food circle too.

In recent years, many species get extinct due to the climate change. The greenhouse effect roses earth's temperature to a high degree which results melting of ice in the Arctic region increases the water level in an ocean. Summers getting hotter and winter does not lasting.Global change biology studies all the imbalance in the environment and marks on the radar. It also helps to know the future of ecology and how the species get extinct can be restored.

To conclude, global change biology is a vast area which can eliminate the climate's wrath. It can also helps to restore the imbalance in our ecosystem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'last'
Suggestion: last
...mers getting hotter and winter does not lasting.Global change biology studies all the i...
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Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Global
...ting hotter and winter does not lasting.Global change biology studies all the imbalanc...
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Line 8, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'climates'' or 'climate's'?
Suggestion: climates'; climate's
... is a vast area which can eliminate the climates wrath. It can also helps to restore the...
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Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...iminate the climates wrath. It can also helps to restore the imbalance in our ecosyst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71465693085 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6799570354 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180815116163 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069693485578 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651203205992 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111823976112 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704540961761 0.0609392437508 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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