"People don't react to climate change because it is too distant. to make the change, we need to focus on the immediate: pollution and air quality." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. support your point of view with reaso

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"People don't react to climate change because it is too distant. to make the change, we need to focus on the immediate: pollution and air quality." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. support your point of view with reason

Pollution is a term very often ignored by common people because the impacts of it are not immediately visible. People very often choose to believe that it is a myth and no action is required to change their actions on pollution and air quality. This essay will discuss, why there is dire need to bring the change in curbing air pollution immediately.

With the current trend, there is already a rise in the global temperature, which is already melting half of the ice present in polar regions, causing a tremendous increase in sea level. For instance, There are few island countries like the Maldives, which are on the verge of downing because of this increase in sea level. Thus it is safe to say that people need to act on pollution now even if changes are not visible at the moment.

Secondly, most of the gasses are invisible, which are not only responsible for the change in climate but also the overall well-being of a person. With the invention of vehicles, pollution is harming the air we breathe. For example, diseases like tuberculosis, asthma, etc are at peak because of the poor air quality. If change is not brought in the current lifestyle there is a great chance of impacting the climate and wellbeing of people permanently.

This essay discussed how climate is deteriorating and wellbeing of people is compromised. In my opinion, It is high time for people to bring the much-required change to avoid permanent damages to nature.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... because of this increase in sea level. Thus it is safe to say that people need to a...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.832 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72950105331 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.518512506 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225235655052 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839828446735 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341015072897 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131128152124 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375642785226 0.0609392437508 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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