Climate inconsistency has burgeoned to become the subject of much controversy, ironically people are unaware of the gravity of its seriousness because they cannot feel the effect yet. At the same time, the ongoing solution to change that mindset is to troubleshoot more conspicuous matter such as pollution and air quality. This essay will discuss why mankind should immediately channel their attentions to the subject of air contamination and quality in order to increase their awareness towards climate change.
People should start pondering about world air condition and its fineness because it is the most noticeable problem of climate change. Air is the most paramount substance for every single living organism on earth including human, hence it goes without saying everyone should notice its change of quality. For example, there has been increasing reports of people having lungs diseases in an area with considerably dreadful air condition, it was also the moment when they realised that the climate has changed. In sums, mortal cannot live without breathing, naturally they will notice the change in quality of the air that they inhaled.
Furthermore, with that in mind, people will consider planting more trees to reclaim fresh air, which will help to reduce climate inconsistency. Trees purify the air by increasing the amount of oxygen, which is an important aspect of air quality. For instance, the weather in the mountain with more trees is much more predictable due to the fresher air and higher level of oxygen. In shorts, planting more trees will improve air quality and mitigate the effect of climate change.
This essay discussed why people should focus their attention to more urgent matter such as pollution and air quality, not only it raises awareness on climate change, it also urges people to plant more trees to nuance the effect. Therefore, I am consummately accorded that people should start focusing on the immediate subject like air contamination and air quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to purify' or 'purify'.
Suggestion: to purify; purify
...ity by planting more trees. Plants help purifying the air by increasing the amount of oxy...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...he effect. Therefore, I am consummately agree that people should start focusing on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29054054054 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62105559507 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523648648649 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1375612296 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199616781176 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813573922218 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380299029407 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135278412773 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265135134609 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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