Road rules are generally enforced by fining people for infringements. Some people, however, believe that governments should not penalize unsafe drivers but reward safe drivers instead. Which view do you support?

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Road rules are generally enforced by fining people for infringements. Some people, however, believe that governments should not penalize unsafe drivers but reward safe drivers instead. Which view do you support?

In the time of modern era, one of the major cause of death is road accidents. It is often argued that people who do not follow the traffic rules should be penalized or rule followers should be rewarded instead. This essay will discuss, how penalizing the unsafe drivers is the best way to maintain road safety.

At the outset, it is well researched that fear of criminal proceedings and fine is the best motivation to avoid the crimes. Stricter are the procedure post any accident, more careful will be drivers. For instance, if a driver is drunk and is aware of the consequences would more likely to avoid driving instead of caring about rewards. Thus, it is safe to say that fear of criminal procedure and strict penalties would be the best bet to ensure road safety.

There are few people who advocate on rewarding the safe drivers instead. These people fail to understand the impact it will have on the country's economy. For example, in a city, if 80 percent of drivers follow rule and are safe drivers then it would require lot of money to monitor and reward each and every one of them. Therefore, it is safe to say that penalizing the rule breakers would be the optimal solution.

This essay discussed, how fining people for infringements would not only impact economy but will also maintain the sense of responsibility in its citizen. In my opinion, penalizing the rule breakers is the only way to enforce the road rules and road safety.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...uire lot of money to monitor and reward each and every one of them. Therefore, it is safe to say t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70980392157 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50460859339 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513725490196 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8752831682 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314615069259 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109774912284 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797795366083 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195061194796 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072699821949 0.0609392437508 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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