Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what do you agree or disagree?
Personal development is the base for professional development.If the base is strong, then pillar will definitely be. I completely agree with the said statement and will discuss my points below in detail.
If the person’s mind is properly developed then that person will definitely grow more smarter with the age as compared to the person who didn’t get much chance to develop personally. With the level of smartness, Mental health will also be much improved and the person will be able to handle the things easily as well as smartly in later stage of career.
Parents and Schools should focus on how to contribute in developing the mind of child with smart ideas and not putting extra pressure or stress. With strong personal development in early age, person will be more presentable in every aspect. If mind is developed then that person will be more disciplined and will be able to cope up easily with all the pressure in any phase of career. As Discipline is the key to success, That person will know how to handle as well as plan the things in better way to avoid run time hustle.
To conclude, If mind is strong then it will work more effectively. Personal development is much required to succeed in your professional career, But not at the cost of stress and mental pressure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...s the base for professional development.If the base is strong, then pillar will de...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
...d then that person will definitely grow more smarter with the age as compared to the person ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80803571429 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68884562302 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4731408025 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.7 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248044855347 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1180048953 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928100909915 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181493490888 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033333540042 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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