Producing clean energy is an impossible goal, instead we need to focus on reducing energy consumption. How far do you agree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of modern world is the colossal upsurge in producing clean energy. There are numerous factors that account to why this is of great importance. The lenient trend towards the consumption of non-renewable energy resources has depleted the abundance of these resources. I am inclined to believe that production of clean energy should go hand in hand with reducing energy consumption and I will scrutinize that throughout this essay.
There are a plethora of reasons accountable for the soaring concern on reducing energy consumption. The most preponderant one is that these non-renewable resources can’t be refilled in the same rate that we deplete them. From a social standpoint, production of clean energy can provide the society with some noticeable effects which is rooted by the fact that this will reduce the consumption of non-renewable energy sources. From my own experience, when I was a University Student I performed an academic experiment which showed that the known energy sources like coal are reducing in a much faster rate than the past decade.
Producing clean energy is not a studious task. The solar power, wind power and tidel power are some of the examples for this which we can go with. The solar energy is considered as the cleanest form of energy. However, this revolution is incurred by the huge cost that is required at initial phase of these projects. Nevertheless, this situation is gradually changing as a result of various government subsidies and other initiatives.
To conclude, be it an affluent or impoverished country, I profoundly believe that the production and consumption of clean energy should be given more focus. This will in turn reduce the current energy scarcity that we are facing now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r power, wind power and tidel power are some of the examples for this which we can go with....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15625 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91204784746 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1865269989 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267846982576 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983922023058 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076892507035 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17535222357 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429098115934 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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