Professional workers like doctors nurses and teachers make greater contribution to society and so should be paid more that sports and entertainment personalities. do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of making the great contribution from professional workers by their acts and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that more wage for them is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that more income for them can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support that should be paid more to professional workers than sports. At first, to pay more money for public services is hard for the ordinary people with lower income. However, more income makes the workers more loyalty to their tasks. For example, professional workers such as doctors and nurses will work better if get more income annually.
In addition, the entertainment is required for happiness, suggested by psychologists. But a lot of wages for some jobs is not essential and helpful to society. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers has shown that a significant number of entertainment specialists and sport individuals spend their money in other countries rather than for their society.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of making more wages for professional workers are far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36444444444 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05819764559 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0162085355 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.727272727 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207330855942 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879930807176 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678727733763 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124951526126 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696079135877 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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