A recent study has shown that over 50% of school children cannot write legibly. The researchers
concluded that the widespread use of smartphones, tablets and computers by children from as young as
12 months old was to blame. We are now living in a “post-paper” world where people are connected to one
device or another at all times.
Should schools stop teaching handwriting entirely and focus instead on their typing skills? Is handwriting
no longer relevant?
A study carried out has shown that a large number of youngsters cannot write properly since the influence of technologic devices has been present in their lives. While some believe that school should extinguish handwriting others strongly support the conventional way of teaching. This essay will discuss why handwriting should be part of the academic skills of children.
To begin with, the easiest form of to learn is through the development of the writing skill. Certainly, the most important skill among the others and also able to promote the development of the brain cognitive area. For example, children as 6 years old who learn different subjects after start writing. The capability of writing is the best way to boost knowledge.
In addition, children who are skilled to be good writers will be better prepared for the academic life. Obviously, they will present good essays during their graduation. For example, students who write 500 pages of conclusion exam. The academic life of writing skilled children is more developed.
This essay discussed why schools should not abnegate handwriting skill which is important for the brain development and wiser future adults. I believe that the abolition of handwriting in the schools is not beneficial for the young.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
A study carried out has shown that a large number of youngsters cannot write properly since ...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...evices has been present in their lives. While some believe that school should extingu...
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Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
... will discuss why handwriting should be part of the academic skills of children. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24019607843 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69888890947 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3558773542 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2307692308 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123706846154 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480324914291 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343289542287 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760835091123 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181858088507 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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