Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high- for the smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.Do Governments have a legitimate role in protecting citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to an individual?
Consumption of tobacco adversely affects health expenses among smokers and health systems around the world. Some people believe governments should be supportive in helping individuals with the side effects of smoking while others believe this decision should be made by smokers themselves. This essay will discuss why governments help people who has smoking habits.
The responsibility to provide assistance to smokers is inevitably held by governments. Tobacco industry injects huge amounts of money when paying high taxes, it is estimated more than 2 billion dollars per year which should contribute significantly to supporting smokers. For example, psychology assistance and quitting programs. Obviously, Governments could manage this money for the support of smoking individuals.
Secondly, it is a role of governments to promote support among smokers. Governments who can carefully control and prohibit tobacco still let tobacco companies destroying people’s life. For example, Philip Morris which has become the richest company in the world. Certainly, this company could stopping killing smokers by the enforcement of governments.
This essay discussed the reasons why smokers needs the help of governments. I my opinion, governments play an important role to be protective and look after smokers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'stop'
Suggestion: stop
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83854166667 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99119349061 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2855975825 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2307692308 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157275934758 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568955532966 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431596301092 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920637810776 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433234321335 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.0 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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