Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Communities have created laws to manage people’s behaviour. Some people believe behaviour is affected by laws, while others believe people make their own choices. This essay will discuss why law leads human behaviour.
Firstly, laws have been created to control human behaviour. Obviously, fear to break the laws lead people to choose better options. For example, youngsters who prefer not to break laws and are deeply affected by fear. Their behaviour is controlled by a range of laws.
Secondly, people prefer to make the right choices without breaking laws. Certainly, those who behave better have strictly followed the rules, for instance, lawyers who need to be an example for societies on their duty. Laws are followed by people who does rights choices.
This essay discussed why laws affect on human behaviour. I believe people choices are deeply affected by the enforcement of the laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...to break the laws lead people to choose better options. For example, youngsters who pr...
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Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...choices. This essay discussed why laws affect on human behaviour. I believe people choic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 1207.87684729 63% => OK
No of words: 144.0 242.827586207 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27083333333 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.92707691288 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52134980935 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 139.433497537 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 379.143842365 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.013217794 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.25 104.977214359 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.9669160288 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21939426782 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980502388543 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599552076958 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156482565598 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676649664335 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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