As a result of advances in medical care. average life expectancy is increasing
for men and women. Do you think most people wilt see this as a positive
developmend What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for
individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or
examples from your own experience or observations
Nowadays it is becoming easier to see elderly dying at the age of eighty or even more. In the past it did not happen. Just because there were not such powerful medications to control people's health. They did not reach the age of seventy or even less. In my vew point, people won't complain about ageing. They will see this as an ordinary factor.
Firstly. elderly will enjoy more the life and do things they had not been doing or had not had the opportunity to do before. For example, they can see the growth of their grandchildren and other generations. Others instances, they may travel abroad and visit others cultures, so they can share the experience with the entire family.
However, there are some disadvantages of ageing. This situation can devise a big issue for government. The more people get old, the more money it needs to have to pay their salaries. In addition, the city gets crowded. Every place becomes full of people what it gets a disturbing situation.
Moreover, people will take medicines to treat some bad foes like cancer or even HIV. This may postpone other diseases to come.
Finally, people will feel better about living under these conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Elderly
...e this as an ordinary factor. Firstly. elderly will enjoy more the life and do things ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78325123153 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43808028632 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.093656178 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.1176470588 104.977214359 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9411764706 20.9669160288 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136554104564 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418289079306 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305669949088 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669415458086 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332250743641 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 12.6369458128 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 53.1260098522 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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