Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons

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Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons

Communication has brought a huge input to society since its discovery. There are several ways to communicate with people around the world and they use it for almost everything. Albeit some people think that it has given arisen to some negative effect for the society, others believe that the positive effects outweigh the negative one. In this essay I will talk over the pros and cons of the impact of communication.
First of all, nowadays thanks to communication is possible to do homeoffice. Many folks who live in big cities find it intricate to commute and would rather stay home to have their work done through the usage of computer. Therefore, there is not a desideratum of tackling intense traffic if they can use softwares to accomplish the chores.
However, communication can be somewhat dangerous in some situations. For example, if parents do not look after their pupils when using social media, it may become a harmful activity for their children.
Finally, in my opinion the pros outdo the cons having seen that there are more benefits than negative effects when using communication in an wise way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an wise way" with adverb for "wise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...gative effects when using communication in an wise way.
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ive effects when using communication in an wise way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 187.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9679144385 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71973373434 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.223485669 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11699589106 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499928953908 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481103231581 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725952395364 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445344799333 0.0609392437508 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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