Role Of Government To Combat Climate Change
Recently, many countries are becoming concerned about climate change. I believe government should step up to make a drastic move to protect the environment. However, individuals should contributes their share to save the nature. This essay will discuss how to fight global warming.
On one hand, there are several reasons combating climate changes. First, administration must have political will to implement using renewable power sources. For instance, wind power may provide with clean and sustainable power sources instead of using sources which contributes air pollution. Another is to limit or eradicate using fossil fuel vehicles it may substitute by electric cars like Tesla which are now more reliable and dependable automobiles. Finally, limiting plastic production, according to the study of group of scientist 60% of foreign object they get in the ocean are non-degradable plastic and 40% are made of wood and other degradable materials. With this will help to minimize the effect of global warming.
On the other hand, the government is not the only one will solved this problem people should do their part also to protect our nature. One of this is start in their home by segregating all recycle and biodegradable materials to control waste. For example, all plastics, aluminum and papers can be used again by sending it again in recycle plant. Another thing is helping the nature to product a clean air by planting trees. In this way polluted air will filter by plants by turning to fresh air. The society should do action for the future of their children.
In conclusion, Government cannot make it by their own to fight increasing world temperature, but the society need to be part of it to support the government initiative for the future of next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...nvironment. However, individuals should contributes their share to save the nature. This es...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...the government is not the only one will solved this problem people should do their par...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, so, another thing, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15862068966 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76334939541 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5537212149 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949772496185 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312674278415 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056098947154 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649186352133 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317594728596 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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