Science and English are the two subjects that should be compulsory in elementary school. Do you agree or disagree
The impotance of subject which was always contentious has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial which other reject his nation. The sustainable influence of subjects such as English and science has sparked the controversy appears to be more rational and this essay will further elaborate my reasons for favouring the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myrid reasons which will further explains this argument, but the most of prepordent one stems from the fact that English is an international language. For instance English language is compulsary if students went to other country.for example with the help of these subjects can get high professions jobs in their countries.
Nevertheless acoording to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of languages, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that science is a informative subject. For instance scientific technology are use for many field.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of language is prominent and scintific technology are use for school banks overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 194.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37628865979 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84029973465 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2685623684 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120531912987 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516899048494 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312526968728 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716155249249 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172548493136 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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