Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Since the beginning of the 21st century, most of the countries have adopted applying laws to protect people in communities. Some people believe that imposing laws leads people to change their behaviors, while others argue that imposing laws is not the right choice to change human behavior. This essay will discuss how imposing strict laws is the accurate solution to maintain the piece inside societies.

Applying strict laws is the right option to change the people behavior because human in his nature does not like to obey laws. Applying fines on people who do not obey the laws will lead significantly to change their behavior. recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge University, has found that 90% of Americans have started using the seat belts when the US government has applied high fines which could reach up to 1000 dollars. Therefore, it seems clear that applying laws will definitely lead to change the human performance.

On the other hand, some people think that applying laws is not the right choice to change the human behavior, because some people do not like to obey rules. Human in his nature loves the challenges. For example, some drivers prefers to drive faster than the available signals. But these people are unaware of the fact that applying laws is useful to protect people lives and preserve their safety. Thus, applying laws is the only way to make people changing their performance.

In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why applying laws is the correct method to change human behavior. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that applying laws is very important to modify the humans behavior and to protect the lives of other people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recent
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4025098523 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491166077739 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5360674349 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411929211791 0.242375264174 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170512607446 0.0925447433944 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125257184709 0.071462118173 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284276239794 0.151781067708 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702374678258 0.0609392437508 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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