Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Age is one of the significant aspects, which partly determines one's ability to perform various tasks and cope with any ramification. However, some hold the opinion that people should not work after a certain age. But, I am not completely satisfied with the given statement.
To begin with, one cannot decide someone's abilities and inabilities by virtue of age, thus people should keep on continuing their work as long as they have an efficiency on account of myriad reasons. Firstly, experience is of one the crucial factors, which comes with respect to time, which in turn make someone more responsible and matured, thereby one becomes an able to have a firm hold in a specific work. In addition, experienced people are considered as true assets for any society and organization, as they become conversant in tackling any situation, which is again unprecedented. On the top of that, people should keep on working after certain because there are certain realms where there is an intense need of experienced and knowledgeable people such as teaching profession and so on. For instance, it has been found that experienced people play a vital role in conferring values to the young members of the family and society.
However, continuous work after a certain age can be a disappointment for others owing to innumerable possible reasons. Firstly, unemployment has become a grim issue for many countries, therefore if people will keep on working, then young people will never get a chance to work and show their skills. Furthermore, there are some areas likewise police, army and so on, where there is a severe need of energy and enthusiasts, which can only be furnished by young people. Therefore, people should retire at an appropriate age. Moreover, young people come with the innovative ideas and methodologies, which can be a fruitful for the development of any country.
In conclusion, I opine that people should retire at a right time so that young people could also get an opportunity to work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 332.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06626506024 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86439923673 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8077938332 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9285714286 7.25397266985 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17547148129 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732719864943 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489732256954 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116953296657 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172465752613 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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