In Some countries around the world voting is compulsary. Do you agree with the notion for the compulsary voting?
Countries like USA, India, Pakistan and someothers are electing their leaders through voting system. Yes, I strongy agree that countries should have voting system to elect thier leaders which will help the people to select right person to rule them forward.
In ancient days, people were under the paradigm of ruled by Kings, Nawabs and people with rich resources. During that period, it was like people to be under their control and follow thier rules unwillingly with no other option. It was for quie long period, they had all the struggle as there was no option to elect their leader by their own. They had to be under same paradigm till the last ruler from the same family. Later, countries like India were become democratic and they have their own constitution built. This removed the model of rich people ruling and people are able to elect their leader by voting system. If the current leader not able to make any developments to the country and fulfill the people's requirements, then can elect the another person as leader in next elections.
However, I also strongly beleive that the voting system should be accurate and transparent. There should not be any corruption, rigging, misleading the people votes. The governmnt should make plans to create awareness in people on how each and every vote is important in electing a leader who will be leading the country. Also, the people who nominate themselves for a particular post should be a well-educated and no criminal background... etc.
To conclude, voting will help us to elect our leaders by the people, for the people and of the people. I suggest that votig system can be adapted to across countries all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92334494774 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44032817318 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4906222388 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141005385065 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575274965429 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406640243216 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112182396248 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415009483247 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.5 Out of 90
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