In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory.Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?If it is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of democracy?’
In democracy, voting playes a major role. It allows people to choose their representative in the government. In some countries voting is mandatory and in few other countries voting is an optional choice. However, in my opinion, this essay agrees with the argument that voting should be mandatory for everyone so that it should help to make a healthy democracy. Many people believe that, if voting is enforced forcefully on the people, than what is the meaning of democracy? Making voting is a delicate issue and it should be discussed in detail before making it compulsory.
Without shadow of doubt, voting is consiter as an effictive tool. Voting allows people to make sure that the elected person should do good for them and make policies which are favourable to the people. However, this is not always the case. For instance; in country like India the average voting percentage is around 50% which is too low to make an effictive government. Making voting compulsory is a right way to insure that everyone is participating in democracy.
On the other hand, in some country voting is mandatory and everyone must vote in election. If they faild to vote without any valid reason, than there are provisions of heavy fines. For example, country like Australia, voting is mandatory for all their citizen up to certain age. If the person failed to vote, then he or she can't access his banking account for 3 months. As a result of this, Australia is one of the fastest growing country with stable political environment. So, making the voting mandatory proves that it is good to everone.
In conclusion, it is important to understand that in democracy, the rights for individual must be protected. Hence, it is not always good to make voting mandatory forcefully. The government should make people aware about the importance of voting first and manage this issue in a way that it should not impact the foundation of people's rights of freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: INSURE_THAT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ensure' (=make sure)? 'Insure' means 'pay money to insurance company'.
Suggestion: ensure
...ing voting compulsory is a right way to insure that everyone is participating in democ...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...faild to vote without any valid reason, than there are provisions of heavy fines. Fo...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e person failed to vote, then he or she cant access his banking account for 3 months...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...e person failed to vote, then he or she cant access his banking account for 3 months...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 329.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67666760685 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4588159982 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.85 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222041748996 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078173323518 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515011386287 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145982338467 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488467261162 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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