Some democrats claim that people who do not take part in voting processes do not have the right to complaint about the situation their communities are in. What is your position regarding this opinion?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether to cast their vote or not. Some people argue that there are numerous adverse effects on refusing votes, on my point of view, I think that there should be freedom either to vote or not. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my argument while analysing both sides of it.
First and foremost, democrats or any other part does not have the ability to influence people in casting their votes, at the same time, they cannot refuse people’s concerns on the basis of their vote. For example, some people may have reasons for not to vote such as unavailability in the particular day in the country due to official commitment. Moreover, some people may be in hospitals on the election day. On that circumstances, it is not fair to penalize them, but some people may have some other reasons on rejecting their votes such s lack of knowledge on voting system.
On the other hand, some people purposely reject voting since they do not have trust in politics. For example, there is a low participation in voting in developing countries, because people are fed up with the system and attitudes of the society.
In conclusion, it is recommended not to discriminate people based on their votes, since they have been elected by majority of people to serve the country. It is also believed that all citizens must be given equal opportunity to raise their concerns, because all of them pay taxes to the government irrespective their discretion on voting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85606060606 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73013318007 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7793903545 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251004040368 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10248115119 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534467637077 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147871807395 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460559847162 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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