Some environmentalists claim that people who drive cars do not have a right to complain about pollution since cars also pollute. What is your opinion?
Recently, local food production has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the advantages and disadvantages of food production locally?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the food industry standpoint, food production is bound up inextricably with environmental requirement, which indicates it leads to both workers and special skills. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between farming and fertilized land as well as an exponential increase in production. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of customer's consent is correlated positively with not only negative effects but also healthy foods.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, farming attribute to unsuitable place for farming, in that it would come down to apartment, limited space, and small house. A salient example of such attribution is organic vegetables, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take local consumption for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint water shortage and building's view problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to husbandry, dairy products, and even domestic animals. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of good planning for food production delivery to costumer and affordable price.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the disadvantages of local food production far outweigh its advantages. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84353741497 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18424939555 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2219965031 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.153846154 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.029625730211 0.242375264174 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00888124065315 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.011331588978 0.071462118173 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0169673063814 0.151781067708 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00328690635095 0.0609392437508 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 55.0591133005 202% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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