Some parents and teachers want their children to study only science related subjects than studying history and literature. Do you agree or disagree with this statement
Yes i think individual should do everything to profit in business.business is not one type people do so many bussiness in our life but in these business the people are profit or loss also.But every people do everything to gain their business.Every persons have their own choice some peoples do jobs or some choose business some people choose marketing bussiness,shoping.which the people business is good which bussiness has demand,qualitiy good the bussiness is good.business is advertising their business for money.When the business is good gaining then they asked to other peoples to join their company and they give good icome.some peoples has their shops they give expensive things to the people for gain their bussines some peoples have not good quality or good quantity they can also give the thing is more expensive because the businessman do anything to gain their business.Because they loss so many money to stand their business or they can also take the profit in the business.some people are take membership with foreingers for gain their business the foreigners advertisement their bussiness or the company give the profit for businessman.some persons have the suits business at home.or they make groups on mobiles or gain more money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Yes i think individual should do everything t...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... business the people are profit or loss also.But every people do everything to gain ...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ness the people are profit or loss also.But every people do everything to gain thei...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...le do everything to gain their business.Every persons have their own choice some peop...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...le do everything to gain their business.Every persons have their own choice some peop...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to market'.
Suggestion: to market
...some choose business some people choose marketing bussiness,shoping.which the people busi...
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Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shoping
...s some people choose marketing bussiness,shoping.which the people business is good which...
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Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , qualitiy
...iness is good which bussiness has demand,qualitiy good the bussiness is good.business is ...
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Line 1, column 517, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...is advertising their business for money.When the business is good gaining then they ...
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Line 1, column 883, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...sman do anything to gain their business.Because they loss so many money to stand their ...
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Line 1, column 904, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ain their business.Because they loss so many money to stand their business or they c...
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Line 1, column 904, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...ain their business.Because they loss so many money to stand their business or they can als...
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Line 1, column 1064, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foreigners'' or 'foreigner's'?
Suggestion: foreigners'; foreigner's
... foreingers for gain their business the foreigners advertisement their bussiness or the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24650196365 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 139.433497537 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 200.0 20.5024630542 975% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1050.0 104.977214359 1000% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 200.0 20.9669160288 954% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 7.25397266985 441% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845628201786 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845628201786 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845628201786 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 103.3 12.6369458128 817% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -139.98 53.1260098522 -263% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 82.5 10.9458128079 754% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.08 8.32886699507 193% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 55.0591133005 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.94827586207 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 82.0 10.3980295567 789% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.5123152709 580% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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