Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.
Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?
There are multitude of people who believe that confidence is the key to be successful in life. But in my opinion, to accomplish goals, one needs both knowledge and confidence. It is because knowledge opens the door to understand the unknowns and confidence will push oneself forward to achieve the aim.
To begin with, confidence need to put together with knowledge to reach greater heights. For instance even the confidence football player can lose any game without the knowledge and practice. Any prior information about the opponents will help a player how to build up the strategy to win the game. Therefore I believe knowledge is the crucial factor in winnings.
Furthermore, only knowledge brings the innovation with success. People fly to the moon, explore space, invade the unknown territory of the seas. For all this, astronauts, divers and any other professionals need accumulated wisdom and also need a substantial amount of courage to move beyond the comfort zone. That is why the I strongly believe both knowledge and confidence are essential things for successful attempts.
To conclude, knowledge laden with confidence will help us to win the big battles. Without the one another, anything will be at distance and all we need for winnings is to gather the knowledge and practice until we gain the confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... build up the strategy to win the game. Therefore I believe knowledge is the crucial fact...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...ve beyond the comfort zone. That is why the I strongly believe both knowledge and con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80333606852 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7619748661 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391485497475 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135388319729 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574516420711 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238558455201 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515373049083 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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