Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
It is a debatable statement that a person's achievement depends on where he or she is coming from. It sounds true but in reality success is not defined by the background of a person but it solely depends on his hard work and his perseverance to live his dream.
First, dreams comes true for the people who work hard. success does not differentiate people by regions or colors or anything. people think that a man born in educated society will always successful as he is able to go to good colleges, surrounded by intelligent people. it is true about their surrounding but does not necessarily important that the person is going to be one of the successful person. if one doesn't work for his goal, he won't be able to meet his goals.
Second is the persistence to chase one's aim despite failures. without failure there is no learning and without learning no one can accomplish his or her target. it is important that even after multiple unsuccessful results, one should persevere for one's goal. if a person gives up and halts his progress towards the success, he or she will never have opportunity to succeed even if he is a great king.
To conclude, success follows endurance and commitment but not any other factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
It is a debatable statement that a persons achievement depends on where he or she ...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Success
...omes true for the people who work hard. success does not differentiate people by region...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...eople by regions or colors or anything. people think that a man born in educated socie...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...eges, surrounded by intelligent people. it is true about their surrounding but doe...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ing to be one of the successful person. if one doesnt work for his goal, he wont b...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...be one of the successful person. if one doesnt work for his goal, he wont be able to m...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...nce to chase ones aim despite failures. without failure there is no learning and withou...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...o one can accomplish his or her target. it is important that even after multiple u...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ssful results, one should persevere for ones goal. if a person gives up and halts hi...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ts, one should persevere for ones goal. if a person gives up and halts his progres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71627906977 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71209457869 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3206894194 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262735784098 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970689065865 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860220095538 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139494255694 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736256116341 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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