Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
The progress of a country depends on the regulation of laws. Laws are the rules laid by the government for the smooth functioning of the country. Laws play an integral role in the society. They help to regulate and keep check on everything. They assist in creating discipline and maintaining peace in the society. Laws influence human behavior. While there are reasons to support that laws influence human behavior positively, I still believe that they have a negative impact on the society as well. At the outset, laws help to restrict human behavior and motivate people to be obedient. For instance, fines are levied for jumping red lights. The fear of penalty leads to obedience in human behavior .As a result, people abide by the laws. Moreover, the fear of death penalty also helps in abating heinous crimes to some extent. Thus, laws like corporal punishment, ban on alcohol etc. play a significant role in creating better and responsible citizens. However, stringent laws might affect the society negatively. To illustrate, if a person is arrested for a petty crime, then he might be instigated by criminals in prison for bigger crimes and this will transform an innocent person to criminal. In addition, there are a few countries where stringent laws have curbed the freedom of people. Hence, laws can have negative implications. To conclude, I would like to say that law and order should be made to make the world a better place to live and where people can enjoy their rights. They should be not so rigid that they undermine the freedom of the society. Moreover, it is the responsibility of the regulatory authorities that they spread awareness of the benefits of laws so that they influence human behavior positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94158075601 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71688551783 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.517613997 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227591396975 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739815622451 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836461642592 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227591396975 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 12.6369458128 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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