today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart era to the computer age at a breakneck speed by accompanied with vast improvements in the standards of living. Likewise, Nowadays television has become crucial part of life to spread intelligence and social awareness. I will discuss this topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, people remain update by information of tv, because they get all types of knowledge like educational, religion, games. Moreover, man has become very busy due to which he have to face many problems like depression, because he not some time for entertainment, so television provide relaxation to mind. Furthermore, television provide us weather related information due to which we can aware and get ready for future natural climatic and human attacks like storms, floods and terrorism attacks.
On the other side, but some people think television impact on study of pupils and they distract from their education and they also become television addicts. Besides this, many people far away from outdoor activities due to television addition, therefore television also impact on their health issues like weakness of eyesight and heart problems. After that, kids sit all day front of the tv screens, due to which they do not proper attention towards their parents and health.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But my opinion is very beneficial to spread any for public, but people should watch the tv in right extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...an has become very busy due to which he have to face many problems like depression, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15702479339 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69508934751 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5815944167 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.454545455 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151206187547 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060403591565 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835960134894 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898944969358 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477521791487 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 73.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.