Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of low which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial for society while, other reject the notion. The substantial influence of under the rules individual not feel good they always underpressor has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in the recent year. In my opinion, low is good for everyone life. This essay will further elaborate my reasons some more positive effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argumentt but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that low make the fear less society and to reduce the some criminal activities like robbary, other accident sudden happen in society. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that low change the individual behavior and make the perfect one. Needless to say, all these merits stand low in a good stead. Elaborating my viewpoint, this trend has some more merits but the most crucial one is that low give the right of every person to live in the democrative contry. Besides, low reduce the discrimination between the people. Hence, it is apparent why many are follow the rule in this trend. According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits low good for every counrty to make perfect country are indeed to gerat to ignore.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...the fear less society and to reduce the some criminal activities like robbary, other...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...ple. Hence, it is apparent why many are follow the rule in this trend. According to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9125 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59097994653 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5910210478 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.181818182 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0520684033611 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208771990925 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285584143874 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520684033611 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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