Different people get success in different fields. Some people work long hours to get success, but others feel that spend free time for joy than Wealth. Which style closely relates you and explain your views?
The choice between dedicating long hours to work and valuing free
time for joy is subjective and depends on individual preferences.
I like to enjoy free time for my joy than wealth. Here, I explain
my point of view and why I chose this type of style.
Firstly, some individuals find joy and fulfillment in their work
or a particular career path. Success means different things to different
people. They may be driven by a deep passion and dedication to their
chosen field, which makes them to invest their time and effort. For
them success is closely to their work, and they prioritize it over leisure
time. They associate success with financial wealth or professional achievements.
Secondly, some individuals see success as not only as professional achievement
but also as an enjoying their free time. Nowadays, many are preferring work
life balance and maintaining a healthy lifestyle. They think taking breaks
and experiencing free time enhances their productivity when they do work.
It is important to consider long term sustainability in their work by having
a free time for joy. Overworking without taking breaks may lead to health
issues, burnouts or make relationships difficult. By focussing over leisure
time will hinder the long term success in other areas of life.
In a nutshell, I pen down saying that their is no right or wrong style in
approaching lives. What is most important is finding a balance that aligns with
our individual goal, values and well being. It is important to remember that
achieving both success and joy is important in fulfilling life.
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| 2023-10-10 | SATHISH KUMAR B | 55 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...passion and dedication to their chosen field, which makes them to invest their time ...
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Line 14, column 57, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...njoying their free time. Nowadays, many are preferring work life balance and maintaining a he...
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Line 22, column 39, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... In a nutshell, I pen down saying that their is no right or wrong style in approach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17938931298 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83583676627 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.058588234 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8235294118 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.12807881773 533% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304466762258 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102406170249 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685301807922 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873566866399 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618735720681 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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