Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Recently, the impact of laws on human behavior has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "do laws change human behaviors?" Whereas it is a widely held view that the laws do not change human behavior, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the psychological standpoint, human behaviors are bound up inextricably with standard of behavior, which indicates they lead to both social norms and criminal norms. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between breaking the laws and crime rate as well as an exponential increase in street crimes. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of human lifestyle is correlated positively with not only social laws but also grown up environment.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, antisocial behavior attribute to bad traits, in that it would come down to educational level, society, and mass media. A salient example of such attribution is drug offender, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take unlawful activity for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint judging system problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of social laws on human behavior.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the influence of laws on human behavior is more significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53623188406 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06721249355 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659420289855 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4411275859 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305726118113 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923233186827 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1000507893 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176232377585 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987612357893 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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