Some people believe paper- based English language exams are superior to computer based one.

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Some people believe paper- based English language exams are superior to computer based one.

In the rapidly evolving society, people have faced numerous exam systems in their living time whilst mainly in paper based exams and computer – based exams. Most of English language tests were taking in that both types such as IELTS, PTE, TOFFEL and local exams. In present millennium, young learners liked to achieve their goals in easiest way because they are familiar with new technological development. However some are arguing about paper based exams were reliable than computer based one because computers will have been errors in suddenly. Thus, all human beings must need to familiar with this technological development because paper basic all things are slowly dropped down.

Dramatically, in digitally crazed world, all education qualifications were based on exams whilst most international exams are in computer based because it was the easiest way to calculate of student’s score. On the other hand computer based exams were not realistic whilst some paper based exam results were depending on examiner by examiner. Important thing is most of computer based exam results were relisted within 2 or 3 days but paper based exams need to have minimum 2 weeks to relisted the results. Thus, computers can be saved and store all things such as personal details and exams results whilst students don’t need to confused to losing exam results.

In conclusion, I strongly disagree with this statement because these both types were different on person to person whilst it depended on person’s education knowledge, computer literacy, hand writing and typing speed. According to the above discussion, I believe computer basic exams are more superior than paper based exams so all need to familiar with this because in the future and even now, computers are fast replacing in many field.  

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the easiest'.
Suggestion: in the easiest
...g learners liked to achieve their goals in easiest way because they are familiar with new ...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...iar with new technological development. However some are arguing about paper based exam...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ic whilst some paper based exam results were depending on examiner by examiner. Important thin...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...ion, I believe computer basic exams are more superior than paper based exams so all need to famili...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...en now, computers are fast replacing in many field.  
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uters are fast replacing in many field.  
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28027681661 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60825299401 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8752643918 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.727272727 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447088361434 0.242375264174 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187685406513 0.0925447433944 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138481008513 0.071462118173 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298988732363 0.151781067708 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711987830241 0.0609392437508 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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