Some people prefer to play team sports, while other prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Than indicate which you prefer and why?
Sports are very important part of our life. It is really essential to practice sport to be involve in games so some players prefer to play team sports and others prefer to paly individual sports. I think each one has advantages.
First of all, playing within a team is more enjoyable and the players can work together to win. Through working together, they will have a chance to win and they will motivate to finish a game with a good result. For example, my brother is playing football in our international team and he told me that it is exciting to work with the team. In fact, last month, they won and they went out to celebrate. He said that they have a good family relationship and this supports them in any game. They watching movies, eating out, and spending a good time together, as a result they motivate to play a game with a good psychological condition. As we can clearly see, team sports benefits the members significantly and it has positive things.
On the other hand, the advantage of individual sports is to show player's talent and to be responsible. In my opinion, individual sport has many positive things to the player and it reflects his work. For instance, three weeks ago, I watched golf game, and a player worked diligently then he won becuase his work and his talent. I was impressed about his playing since he was very smart and this indicates that he worked hard. I definitely was astonished about his playing and his personality. Actually, he got an award and it is just for him and he got a lot of money because he worked a lot that helped him to be a responsible person. His parents were very happy because he is a successful person and they were proud of him. Besides, playing individualy makes him more independent since he endorses his family.This player taught me what is the difference between team sports and individuals sports.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I think each view has benefit and we have to appreciate all sports and all players. I think all sports are specious and worthwhile. we have to consider these sports as our success.
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| 2019-06-20 | Amandeep Kaur sandhu | 55 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, really, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, as a result, by the way, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 20.9802955665 286% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1207.87684729 145% => OK
No of words: 377.0 242.827586207 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63395225464 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64579784851 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503978779841 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 4.6157635468 347% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1559472956 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1904761905 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 6.9802955665 301% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162998480105 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509445588109 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808269770182 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117584292497 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109397956738 0.0609392437508 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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