Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Surely there has been not time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals parenting of child has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether parents should be blame for their child’s activities or not. Regarding this, I would say that they that they should take responsibility of their child’s action.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance has to do with the fact that toddler’s first learning starts in his home. Furthermore, parents are considered to be their first teachers. As a result, it depends on the guidance of couples whether they guide their infants in a right path or not. As a case in point, it is clearly seen that coming generation of educated family is always well educated and well mannered as compared to that of a family, which is uneducated. Hence, family background matters a lot in reshaping child’s future.
Looking back to the introduction, one could also argue that children’s mind is considered like a earthen pot and it depends on their guardians to shape them in a right or wrong way. Therefore, child’s success is dependent on the guidance of an individual.
To conclude, I want to say that it is very easy to brain wash an individual’s mind. So it is a duty of the path finder to show them the right path.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'blamed'?
Suggestion: blamed
...e and explain whether parents should be blame for their child's activities or no...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'that they'.
Suggestion: that they
...ies or not. Regarding this, I would say that they that they should take responsibility of their chi...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...children's mind is considered like a earthen pot and it depends on their gua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90573770492 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07492601231 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8827215458 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190322856265 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646098031934 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618977739846 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995215257086 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052038058199 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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