Some people think human behaviors can be limited by laws others think laws have little effect What is your opinion

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Some people think human behaviors can be limited by laws, others think laws have little effect. What is your opinion?

Recently, human behaviors have sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "is it advantageous or not?". Whereas it is a widely held view that breaking laws is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the psychological standpoint, breaking laws is bound up inextricably with law limits, which indicates they lead to severe laws' effects. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between strict laws' effects and antisocial behaviors. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of state legislatures is correlated positively with breaking laws.
Within the realm of sociology, without the slightest doubt, aw limits attribute to breaking laws, in that it would come down to rigid laws. A salient example of such attribution is laws' effects, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take abnormal behaviors for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint social problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of human behaviors.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of human behaviors are of more significance.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...ying goes 'alls well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59360730594 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16663292196 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694063926941 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1590397992 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183535788894 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624000983228 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403502034688 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099524138298 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241815542573 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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