What are the effects of doing sport on the human's overall health and lifetime?
recently, the effects of sport on the human's health has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the consequences of sports on individual lifetime?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the health perspective standpoint, individual's health factors are bound up inextricably with healthy life style, which indicates they lead to both physical and mental health. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between physical activities and different sports as well as an exponential increase in body fit. Their academic criticism was impressive. consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contentions that the likelihood of doing exercise is correlated positively with not only losing weight but also psychological effects.
Within the realm of biology, without the slightest doubt, healthy diet attribute to long lifetime, it that it would come down to less stress, depression, and anxiety. A salient example of such attribution is daily activities, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take leisure time for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint modern social life style problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to cholesterol level, hormones, and even heart diseases. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of regular sports class.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the importance of sports in individual's lifetime is highly significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64948453608 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12810302241 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 139.433497537 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1877079448 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217467163176 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557172925536 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940410222902 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123838556845 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923910683168 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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