Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
Law is defined as a set of rules and regulations developed by government institutions. While some people think that human behaviour is shaped by the legal system, others argue that the rules and regulations do not influence human behaviour. This essay will discuss how legal system shapes human behaviour in society.
Human society has developed complex legal system with a standard set of rules based on local culture. These rules are commonly accepted among the local people and act as a standard guideline in social interaction between humans. The rules and regulations are inherited and developed from generation to generation. By which mean, children are educated to follow the law and the law is kept up-to-date to the development of the society. As a result, law changes the way that human behaves.
Law is established and updated by human to promote good behaviours and punish bad behaviours. Law describes in detailed negative behaviours and its punishments to enforce people to follow. For instance, difference levels of punishment are introduced to prevent negative behaviours that go against other people or society benefits. Such carrot and stick approach encourage people to behave in a better manner and prevent people to do bad things.
Human creates law and law influences human behaviour in social context. This essay discussed how law shapes human behaviour through educating younger generation and setting out punishments to prevent bad behaviours.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35344827586 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81957180025 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9073114118 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7142857143 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361329711092 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134945480018 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978182046391 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228409304708 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553187793997 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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