Some people thinks that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. which opinion do you agree with?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in number of people believing that keeping pets is good for children. there is widespread worry that this will lead to a myriads of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
there are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that keeping dogs at home cannot contribute protect house from thieves, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless, to say all these merits stand one in good stead, As far as the augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when follows such system, can they broaden their horizons, learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence it is apparent why many are in the favor the aforementioned topic.
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude that the benefits of keeping dog at home are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84557542966 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3269494549 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918662899171 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328577021376 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553206562475 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516637875453 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464879027098 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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