Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies.
Education is key of success, which open doors of life and essential for personal, social and economic success. Students commute to distinct places for higher studies, whereas, some children study at their native place. I intends to discuss both aspects before forming any opinion.
There are many reasons why students travel for higher studies. To commence with, students go to distinct places and go through stiff competition among their peers. Hence, they can go though any situation. Moreover, going overseas for higher studies make them known to different cultures and traditions except their native cultures. Hence, they get to know about other religions. At last but not least, students meet professionals at one place of diverse religion and get view point of each.
There are many facts, why people study at their local place. To begin with, some children are inherited talented. For instance, talented children use resources and make their self understand and get proper knowledge. Hence, they can do by their own self. Furthermore, children who are intelligent they take experts help and go through their ways and get higher degrees.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion, I opine that travelling for higher studies to overseas or mega cities are helping them to be successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, as for, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24038461538 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55470835191 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0440237862 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20885694425 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722862521366 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909387599212 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142668369261 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458343644892 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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