Young generations are getting inspired by stories of successful sports stars and glamorous film stars. These stars are their role models who are having astounding effects in their lifestyle and ideologies. This essay will explain why such inspiration can be fruitful, but can also lead to several unacceptable outcomes if it is not provided or taken appropriately.
Celebrities life stories can provide an excellent source of inspiration for youngsters. Using their stories, views, ideas, and actions of young people can be molded, which can result in inculcating better morale in youngsters. For example, several inspiring stories of how sports person came from nothing to finally winning gold medal gives a clear message of not giving up, even if circumstances are against you. Such stories and ideas can have an unprecedented impact on their lives, which will help in driving the strong possibilities of success.
Though, in some cases, youngsters role model makes certain unacceptable comments, which can damage underlying morale of the people who are following them. Being their role model, these people accept and instill anything said by them, leading to several critical and unforeseen situations. For instance, a celebrity doing drugs or smoking is often taken as an inspiring idea among the youth, which can be detrimental and disturbing for their lifestyle. Thereby, stars should take special care as to what they are saying or expressing since they share the responsibilities of people whom ideals depend on their thoughts.
Youngsters choose successful sports stars and glamorous film stars as their role models. In my opinion, they provide a great source of direction towards success, but one should not entirely rely on these people for inspiration, as even these stars often make mistakes or deliver unacceptable notions, which can lead to detrimental effects in the lifestyle and growth prospects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41333333333 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82971533708 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9138964534 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261746890839 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113934056602 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122724832908 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183414620981 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810473169565 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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