Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
The controversial topic with respect to famous stars never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether young people should choose those stars to be their role model. As far as I am concerned, I inclined to believe that role models have both positive and negative impacts on their followers.
On one hand, adolescents should realize that becoming a celebrities in film industry or athlete arena is a life long work of tenacity, struggle and industriousness. For example, the famous Indian movie star, Amilhan leads a life of learning and sharpening his acting skills when he is 78 years old. As a result, he is a source of inspiration of many young generations. In short, youngsters should be aware of hardworking and consistency since childhood form their respective heroes.
On the other hand, a few number of celebrities post their personal life on social media which has adverse effects on their followers. Take playboy for instance, influenced by his lavish daily life records, many young people are found wasting their time on parties and other entertainments which could deteriorate their future life. In light of this, such behavior should be discouraged and role models should be responsible to their manners on social media.
In conclusion, due to the foregoing views, the merits of famous people outweigh the negative impacts on youngsters. Thereby, young people should carefully choose their role model in order to learn useful traits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a celebrity' or simply 'celebrities'?
Suggestion: a celebrity; celebrities
...dolescents should realize that becoming a celebrities in film industry or athlete arena is a ...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...pective heroes. On the other hand, a few number of celebrities post their personal life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17842323651 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79820070236 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2450469926 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137547017932 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534945818704 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455181385085 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921484267107 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500517575082 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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