Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. Do you support it or not? (Agree/ disagree)
New generation youngsters are always inspired by the act of celebrities from any field. It is argued that famous sportsmen and actors are influencing the minds of young people whereas some people deny that they are not. This essay will discuss that any successful person in their profession can be an inspiration to the upcoming generation.
First of all, everyone needs to have someone as role model in their field of interest. The successful heights of any profession, is known by a celebrity who has achieved For instance, Mahendra Singh Dhoni, the captain of Indian team has motivated so many children and young people who has interest in playing cricket. There was also a movie released based on his life history which documented in overcoming his struggles to become a super star in cricket.
Secondly, few people think that in certain professions like Cinema, youngsters are misled by glamorous actors. But in fact, they are being an inspiration for the youth in the Modelling industry. For example actress Sridevi has become so successful in her career for her versatile acting Many people in modelling industry has moved into acting in movies by having some lessons learned like their body language, dialogue delivery etc from these celebrities.
This essay discussed the positive sides of why it is good to follow role models who have established their names in their field. In my opinion, sports stars and actors or any successful person in their profession can be a motivational figure for anyone who has the thirst to excel in their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is known by a celebrity who has achieved For instance, Mahendra Singh Dhoni, the ...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...n movies by having some lessons learned like their body language, dialogue delivery ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03474903475 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65010034848 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5737913138 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158722238381 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058287898202 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409983855245 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960544774037 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465123283934 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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