Successful sports stars and glamours film are role model for youngster. Do you sported or not?
The important effect of successful sports stars and glamours film are role model for youngster, which was always debatable, but ahs now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of sports stars and glamours film are role model for youngster has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion, the former latter propositon appears to be more rational and this essay will further elaborate my reasons. For forming the positive affect of this trend and thus will be a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are numerous reasons sports stars and glamours film are role model for youngster but the most conspicious one stem from fact there are several news regarding sportsmen when they are involved in drug taking scandel and these kind of act.
Nevertheless according to some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelem the potential influence of sports stars and glamours film are role model youngster, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that several film stars are caught in this kind of act to but the most thing is fact film stars influence youth mostly because they show a dream.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of sport stars and glamours film are role model for youngster is prominent although the way it depend on youngster choise in which way they want to go should be overlookrd either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97046413502 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52537902344 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510548523207 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3596199297 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.285714286 104.977214359 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 20.9669160288 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491571724371 0.242375264174 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253224820879 0.0925447433944 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15995876603 0.071462118173 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316927086972 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545724927883 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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