Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals people going to the urban areas from the rural areas has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
To begin with,the advantages of the living in the urban areas. The first and foremost advantage is that in the urban areas better employments. People get the job easily in urban areas. There is good medical facility in the urban regions. Another facility of urban areas is that people live the high standard life and get everything which they want in their life.
Other peoples think that the life in the rural areas is better than the urban areas. The main reason is the environment in the rural region is clean and unpolluted as compare to the urban areas. In countryside areas the prices of vegetables and other daily life needed things cheap. Mostly the vegetables, fruits and other accommodations people grow in their fields for this reason the people of rural areas are healthy.
In conclusion we can say that the lives in both areas are good. It depends upon the peoples in which areas they want to live in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 1207.87684729 64% => OK
No of words: 163.0 242.827586207 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74233128834 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32367176843 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 139.433497537 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484662576687 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 379.143842365 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5019935507 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2727272727 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250787947684 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110055160569 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480763479199 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18460486602 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00993213379206 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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