Technological inventions come out on a daily basis. Take one example and discuss its advantage and disadvantage to individual and society.
There is no doubt that technological advancement has brought numerous inventions into existence. The most of these discoveries have made human life comfortable. Computer, antibiotics, and airplanes are some of the examples of these creations. Among these inventions, I believe that the computer has the most significant role in everyone’s life. This essay will discuss some of the points related to this topic.
Firstly, it is now possible to finish every task faster than ever before. Scientific calculations that were not possible to finish in days are now can be done in hours. Moreover, the computer has helped in banking sector too. It has made it easy to keep the transactions records and accounts in the banking sector. Before the introduction of the computer, the majority of works done manually but the computer have increased the speed of the work.
In addition to this, even robots function in computer programming. They have made it possible to finish the tasks even in a radioactive environment. It was not possible for anyone to work in these conditions but robots are doing it precisely.
In the end, every creation has its own benefit for mankind. It depends upon the way they get used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.115 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90075421227 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3567041896 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2 104.977214359 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0479333429712 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158123309236 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284379318016 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0277822775217 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030983597691 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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