Television

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uments. There are several reasons why . One of them is that. It can also be arg...
^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be argued that. It should also be taken into account that. For example, . Tho...
^^^
Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... taken into account that. For example, . Those who argue for have a different...
^^
Line 11, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ruguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that. I would strongly recommend t...
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Line 11, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se, my personal opinion is that. I would strongly recommend that.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 31.9359605911 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 555.0 1207.87684729 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 242.827586207 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70338983051 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.92707691288 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36923276376 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 139.433497537 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669491525424 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 379.143842365 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.5024630542 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.676939584 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.25 104.977214359 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.83333333333 20.9669160288 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 12.6369458128 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 53.1260098522 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.9458128079 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.5 11.5310837438 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 55.0591133005 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.94827586207 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.3980295567 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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