Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
There is no doubt that Television nowadays still plays an important role in our life regardless of the colossal upsurge of Internet usage. The TV used to be a source of knowledge and for relaxing time, but unfortunately, its role been deviated to be just for entertainment and ignoring important cultural and scientific content. This essay will explain how TV nowadays far effectively play its roles regarding entertainment and knowledge.
First, as an entertainer, TV still attract a wide audience from different ages ranges and different culture. Media producers and TV channels have developed a huge amount of programs for that purpose. for example, we can notice the popularity of drama series, talk shows, talents shows, and sports games. As a result, still TV plays an important role in entertainment.
On the other hand, I believe that the volume of direct useful information content still not up to the satisfaction level. Scientific, cultural and artistic programs have been declined compared to the entertainment content. as a subsequence, a recent survey highlighted how the tiny number of TV followers of such content, and people now, for example, prefer to search over the internet for that required material.
This essay argued that today's TV content is biased towards entertainment in favor of useful information. In my opinion, TV should strenth its power of spreading important knowledge across its audience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, still, for example, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33039647577 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01874315936 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3443217329 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132597498605 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538592801456 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419346413692 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079997181956 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398525972052 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.