Television is mainly used as either a media to gain information or entertainment. Some people think that television is more to an informative device, others argue that it is purely a device for entertain people. This essay will discuss that TV is in fact serves more function for entertainment than informative media.
With the vast development of internet nowadays, TV starting to lose its purpose as a device to gain local news. People opt to mobile devices more as they get notification in real-time as soon as the news happen, whether if they come in media or text form. For example, people who get informed by the local traffic news to avoid certain location will get the direct benefit from the news rather than have to get the information from the TV that is sitting at their home. Needless to say, TV is not portable as compare to mobile devices if being used for device to gain information from.
Furthermore, it can be observed that recently the TV became larger each releases. People are reported to gain more fun when watching movies or playing games with high-definition and larger screen. In shorts, producers also indirectly acknowledge TV roles in entertainment by publishing more high-definition TV to the market, which is the more reason why they are more suitable for entertainment purposes.
This essay has discussed TV roles as both information and entertainment device and the reason why it starting to lose its purpose as informative media. I am consummately in accord that it is in fact more efficient to use TV as an entertainment device.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
Television is mainly used as either a media to gain information or entertainment. S...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...news. People opt to mobile devices more as they get notification in real-time as s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9358490566 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98412555701 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4818400695 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186832604527 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790816998704 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417433420201 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132322086152 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323998147635 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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