The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The world gets peace because of nuclear weapons development. Nuclear power imports more clean energy and it is less cost as well. There are a lot of advantages compared to disadvantages. According to me, I totally disagree with this point and I believe that nuclear power has had more negative results on the society than positive. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefit of nuclear energy is less expensive and we would get more reliable energy which could be more useful for generation of power and other industries as well. For example, the countries which they could not have the coal and crude oil, they would use the nuclear to generate the power for the industries and utilities.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, the nuclear power has negative consequences in various ways. Firstly, it affects the human genetic system in which we would mingle and playing with the nuclear power station. Secondly, the world super power countries are threatening the underdeveloped countries by using the nuclear weapons and it could cut more healthy relation between the neighboring states.
Lastly, in my opinion, the nuclear energy has a very gigantic disaster in this world due to latest technology.
Taking these points into consideration, without a shadow of a doubt, I conclude that nuclear power has demerits and in turn, it affects the natural system of universe and spoils the vital, tremendous bond between the mankind and ecological balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'weapons'' or 'weapon's'?
Suggestion: weapons'; weapon's
...The world gets peace because of nuclear weapons development. Nuclear power imports more...
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Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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...ower for the industries and utilities. On the other hand, in spite of these arg...
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...lation between the neighboring states. Lastly, in my opinion, the nuclear energ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02255639098 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64264055413 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9500246615 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265055145283 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11133836149 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553259392336 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149408453274 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600516589626 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.