Since the discovery of nuclear energy, media has been constantly declaring in favor of this energy instead of other sources of energy, such as petroleum or gasoline. While the nuclear energy appears to be more economical and pollution-free, in my view, the drawbacks of exploiting this energy are more significant than its advantages.
On the one hand, in terms of environmental issues, the inevitable radioactive waste needs to be disposed appropriately and yet, there are not any environmentally sound solutions. Apparently, deep geological disposal is the merely practical solution which may come at a great cost. The area needed for long-term waste storage is incredibly extensive. This issue potentially contaminate the groundwater sources and the soil or may kill the living organisms in turn. Besides, the other side of the issue refers to nuclear power plants which can be threatened by natural disasters such as flood, earthquake or tsunami. The casualties and side-effects of such incidents are catastrophic.
On the other hand, when it comes to the world peace, surprisingly, the nuclear weapons can lead to growth in the tensions and unrest among the countries. As a matter of fact, it may contribute to misuse by some ambitious governors in an uncontrolled way and ignites a global war as what happened in World War ||.
The main conclusion to be drawn from this discussion is that the disadvantages of the nuclear technology far outweigh its advantages although it is claimed to be cheap and environmentally friendly.
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- Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living. Discuss. 11
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- Recent research shows that the consumption of junk food is a major factor in poor diet and this is detrimental to health. Some people believe that better health education is the answer to this problem but others disagree. What is your opinion? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be cheap and environmentally friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30204081633 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17483838704 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0108211168 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186413134953 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594840399735 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643613930771 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116508849989 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466921370164 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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