Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarrettes, is one of the mostly wide used drugs in the world. Over a bilion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high - for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity. Do government have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizensfrom the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individuals?
People have become addicted to tobacco for years. Not just adult but teenagers use it. Of course, teenagers use it hidden from parents. It is a big issue to deal with in terms of health and money. In my opinion, government should stop growing or legislating tobacco.
Firstly, tobacco is a big threat to health. It may cause cancer and other ailments to stomach. Currently, many people are dying and suffering due to the usage of it. Hospitals are getting crowed. Therefore, legislating it should prevent all those stuffs from happening.
However, even if government stops that, it is a hard task to stop with it for whom is already addicted. We hear from friends and family members who are trying to stop use it that it is pretty hard. They are aware of the situation and all they can do is taking other medicines in order to stop feeling the necessity of smoking tobacco.
Secondly, stopping producing tobacco is a very helpful way for people's health. Even though government will not make money with tobacco, but, at least, the population will not face issues related to tobacco.
Finally, governments eradicating tobacco help its citizens to have a better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tomach. Currently, many people are dying and suffering due to the usage of it. Ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, therefore, at least, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 199.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84924623116 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55467225778 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8929731501 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.3125 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4375 20.9669160288 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185322227491 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613644550829 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049788154461 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10383475887 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570192400866 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 12.6369458128 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.94827586207 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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