In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
Nowadays, everybody watches TV. Documentaries, entertainment and many other channels which play important roles are among the most viewer by telespectators. People who watch those channels range from children to elderly. In my opinion, TV can have other impacts on population.
Firstly, there are many bad and fake news that are displayed on TV. For example, tragedies and conflicts are watched by children. This is due because some children do not have access to educational channels.
Secondly, TV can have a bad impact on people's mind. Commercials shown on it may spur people, specially teenagers, to commit suicide. As one example of it happened in the 90's. A teenager saw on TV commercial that a man threw from the bridge trying to save a biscuit. Afterwords, the man became a heroe. Unfortunately, the teenager passed away trying to do the same.
On the other hand, there are documentaries channels where we can find thousands of useful informations. We learn about science, history, etc. Those channels are important tools that may be used for everybody. Teenagers may use them while preparing for colleges and adults can make use of them at work.
Finally, there are pros and cons related to TV. It can be good in some ways but bad in other ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...specially teenagers, to commit suicide. As one example of it happened in the 90s. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93867924528 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86399230798 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9983840638 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.1052631579 104.977214359 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1578947368 20.9669160288 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117231408691 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364198968183 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351221125623 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067032705744 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266885572126 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 12.6369458128 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 53.1260098522 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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